A blog will help my english writing for three reasons. First, I can write pargragh about english. It can help me how to write correct sentences. When I write sentences, it has many problem, the seantences went wrong, but I can’t find it. I need people to help me to find the problem and tell me how to write correct sentences. Second,when I write pargragh, I need to use many words let me make sentences. A blog can help remember the words and how use those words. The third reason is that when I will reading the other people pargragh, it can help me how to write beautiful pargragh, and I can write better.
This is a good paragraph jackie! I love how you put idioms in your writing!
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Jackie, your paragraph is very well organized. You have given very thoughtful reasons for keeping a blog.
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